Open Poetry #16 |
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Ever After |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa ![]() |
Every smile has its reasons Every kiss hopes for forever Every heart with passing seasons Dreams of one to make things better Every glance becomes a fable Once upon a time of laughter There was a boy willing and able To be your man for ever after |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been a while since we've seen you, Kevin! Welcome home, and thanks for this! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Hi cutie pie~ Good to see your smile again~ This is a sincerely sweet write~ *HUGS* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How wonderfully romantic. I really liked reading this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with me today. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kev, Hello!! Wonderful write...this was just beatiful. Thanks for the wonderful smile you've put on my face. You are such a cutie BTW ![]() Take care. Amy "I could kiss you in |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like the thoughts here...It's good to want a relationship that last for a long time...I am finding that the most important part of a relationship is that both parties have the same mind and desires for if one is thinking forever and the other is thinking lets just have a good time and go our separate ways problems will soon surface...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write here! Hope to see more from you! ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kevin, A lovely poem. Enjoyed the read. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Hey! Kevin, I love the rhythm and rhyme in this loving piece. It flowed like ripples on a babbling brook... Pen on! ![]() Love and peace Maggie ((~.~))
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Hi Keven! So nice to see ya posting again. Much enjoyed as always. I have always love how you write, heart and soul. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Welcome back to the blue pages, Kevin ![]() What a sweet write ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sweet words, Kevin, enjoyed reading... ~Tier |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is lovely. I love the truthful words spoken in it and the thoughts it conveys. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BUMP!!! ![]() "I could kiss you in |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very sweet, Kevin, but sad.... (Thanks for the bump, Amy, or I would have missed this!) ![]() God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i didn't find this sad at all..... i found it beautiful......... wonderful writing ![]() |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is so sweet and romantic. Pure love forever after. =) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a lovely poem this is. Thank you for sharing it. |
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