Just for Nightshade . . . Challenge response #5 . . . What is on her mind?

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Just for Nightshade . . . Challenge response #5 . . . What is on her mind?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-31 10:38 AM

#5
Nightshade
averting her eyes
just at the proper moment
I stand there gazing
~*~
I am too brazen
she too much of a lady
will we ever meet
~*~
then she smiles and nods
the moment takes breath away
as I approach her
~*~
she breathes her first name
I croak out mine and she smiles
Takes my arm and walks
~*~
My arm feels her warmth
Oh how that warmth affects me
Does she feel it too
~*~
then I take notice
she has a picnic basket
what is on her mind

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-31-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-31 10:45 AM

*giggling* sounds like the most delightful of picnics will come from this meeting. BRAVO!!!She will love this one.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-10-31 11:24 AM

You croaked? Oh No! What are the rest of the Passionate Females going to do without their tributes! I insist you get back up, and try again!

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-10-31 11:31 AM

Hehe, no no no! Don't you remember what happens at picnis?

Unless you're willing to search out an ant free area.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-31 11:51 AM

Tee hee...good one! Chris had better be careful where she sets that basket down...not on the same ant hill I sat us on, I hope! But...does she really have a picnic on her mind?

(a magical picnic on Halloween? Could be scary!) Hummm.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-31 12:37 PM

Oops, forgot to warn you. If she offers you an apple out of that basket...DON'T EAT IT!!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2001-10-31 01:22 PM

A tisket a tasket
Guess what's in my basket.
If you have to croak again
This time better mask it !!!!

Ahhh sweet Interloper, don't be afraid my pretty....nor your little frog...umm...I mean dog. I love this!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-31 01:59 PM

Wow, I have to catch up - these are fantastic Interloper, you sure have stamina!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-10-31 05:53 PM

you sure are a busy man.....

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2001-11-01 06:19 AM

Vienna Sausage? You are provoking mystery! Love these..moving to next.

Sincerely,
Regina

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2001-11-01 08:51 AM

You are so charming. I just love it.

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