Open Poetry #16 |
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October's Chill ( In Response To Sven's) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia ![]() |
![]() October's Chill A lighter side to gray has consumed the view I see overhead So, my friend as you button your overcoat and face the crowded streets Tuck inside my wishes that I send to the first star that appears For October's chill it has a message just for you from me... The star greets me with the coolest winds as if it can hear my every word And, without hesitation my heart speaks messages I hope you can hear One by one I place my faith in what nature placed before me Hoping that the wind sends you my heart this time of year... I watch the leaves throughout the day and find meaning in them all So, when you see them blowing along those streets think of this You know the yellow ones that shine like the sun in summer time? They are there to let you know, My Friend, just how much you are missed... Sometimes you'll see the orange ones dance along the cold, cold ground But, it is the orange ones that say that you are safe They stand for my wish that your very present and future in life Be guided, so gently, at an angels pace... Think of the brown ones touched with a trace of gold To be my way of saying how touched that I am And, as my thank you for being what kind represents Like a hand shake between the miles of two friends... The red ones they say so much all on their own That through this October's chill you are not alone If you still wonder if you will ever be warm again Then remember the leaves and their message when the cold day ends... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) This is so pretty, sweet Saunni! (smiles) We are all together, for our love is always in each other, and with the power of love we are always intertwined in spirit and heart! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Saunni! So good to see you again. I liked that picture very much. It had a warming effect on me tonight, and it's going back down again to ZERO probably, and sub-zero by Sunday. BRRRR. Thank you, warm heart. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what can I say?? thank you Saunni. . . it's beautiful. . . one of your best. . . I will treasure this. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely beautiful. I was captivated by the colors that flowed so perfectly in this poem. Wonderful writing. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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