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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-19 05:01 PM

windows of the soul
your eyes have spoken volumes
and my eyes listen
~*~

Inspired by: This Place Where Meaning Gathers

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-19-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-19 05:08 PM

Nice...very very nice....Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-10-19 05:16 PM

ever dusty glass
encapsulates your soulful
though I wipe it clean

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-10-19 05:18 PM

"my eyes listen" wow, love that, nice from you...

Greeneyes~

***

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-10-19 05:18 PM

framed within your hold
prismed panes color my words
for your eyes only

~Wynter..I always love how you express yourself in small format

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-10-19 05:27 PM

Interloper--You have given me a smile today...thank you!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2001-10-19 06:53 PM

Interloper - This is lovely. The eyes truly are the windows of the soul...I believe. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-10-19 06:59 PM

Short but so very sweet. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-10-19 09:10 PM

*sigh* yes, the eyes are so revealing. I love this one. Tender and beautiful to read.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-10-19 09:23 PM

(big hugggssssss) Isn't it amazing how just the eyes can reveal and tell so much about the wonders of a person! (smiles) Beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-10-19 09:45 PM

How true! Perfectly expressed...I, too, love the power of eyes!
Heck, you're a haiku master!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-10-22 02:12 PM

Such nice and warm comments for which I thank you all

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

12 posted 2001-10-23 01:44 PM

Bumpity

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2001-10-23 02:13 PM

Yes,
this is short,
to the point,
profound.
Aye, aye, say these eyes.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2001-10-23 03:34 PM

InterLoper~
Lovely inspired thoughts~
Lovely the piece that inspired it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

15 posted 2001-10-23 06:21 PM

The eyes do have a certain market on communication don't they. Well written. Liked it alot.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

16 posted 2001-10-23 07:11 PM

Love it.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

17 posted 2001-10-27 06:44 AM

Interloper-
   Beautiful thoughts you've penned here.
   Much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

18 posted 2001-10-27 02:54 PM

Interloper,

This is just so beautiful.

Thank you for sharing with us.

Dawn

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