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Open Poetry #16

Dreaming of Tomorrow

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

0 posted 2001-10-26 11:10 PM

A crown of gold bathes her head
Dreamily she looks out the window
Saying goodbye to summer with much dread
Thinking of warm winter fires instead.

Memories fly through her mind
Of days of old when life was carefree
Thoughts of snowmen built with colors of doves
Surrounded by a family she loves.

Sitting by warm candlelight
Surrounded by friends warm laughter they share
Laughter to warm the heart when cold
Dreaming of tomorrow, having someone new to hold.

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

1 posted 2001-10-26 11:14 PM

Dawn, like the feeling of melancholy here... I have the same feeling of late...I love fall but dread the long months of winter coming...thanks for sharing...

Lets Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-10-26 11:19 PM

Surrounded by friends warm laughter they share
Laughter to warm the heart when cold

There is nothing like good friends to warm the heart. Perfect

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

3 posted 2001-10-27 12:00 PM

Very nice poem, I hope your fires are warm and that you find that someone special to share them with. Until than enjoy the laughter with friends.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-10-27 12:06 PM

*sigh* I know the feeling. It would be wonderful to share the cold of winter wrapped in loving arms. *sigh* this wonderful poem got me to dreaming.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2001-10-27 01:39 PM

this was beautiful. warms the heart. brought back a lot of wonderful memories for me. thank you. lovely write!
take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

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