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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-26 08:36 PM


I wonder do you feel my loss
as greatly as I do feel yours.
Somehow I feel that you do not
you always leave me wanting more.

I'd give you love of Goddesses
to change your life into a dream
If only you would let me touch
that place within you hide from me.

Do you not know how very real
and rare is love like this to know?
Do you not care my heart does break?
If only you would love me so.

I ask for help, guidance divine
to help me live this love for you.
As nothing more is left for me,
there's little else that I can do.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-26 08:44 PM


They may not have any answers but when you write them down you take them out of your heart where they have been eating at you and put them to paper where the pain can get just a little bit less. He has lost a chance to have something rare and beautiful in his life and someday he will look back and ask his own questions that there will be no answers for. BRAVO!!!!MAGNIFICENT!!!***HUGS***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

snowpants
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2 posted 2001-10-26 08:51 PM


'I'd give you love of Goddesses
to change your life into a dream'

'I ask for help, guidance divine
to help me live this love for you'

Wonderfully written, Sandra...very good expression of these emotions...just remember that you will find someone who wants you for what you already are and won't have 'decision' issues...great poem...

sp  

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

cpalmer
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3 posted 2001-10-26 11:36 PM


Sandra,
Love can be blind sometimes....I agree, there will come a man who will love you for who you are and with all the love to give to you! Good luck...and beautiful write!
Hugs
Cindi

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4 posted 2001-10-26 11:41 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, my heart cries out to your feelings, for I can relate to these so very well! (sigh) There will be an answer to all your heart desires, and when you least expect it, you will be welcomed by the loving man of your dreams your passions sing for! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your heart always shines with love and compassion! I love you! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-10-27 08:32 AM


Thanks everyone, but I wonder if it will ever really be so..
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-10-27 11:48 AM


enjoy
Tracey
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7 posted 2001-10-27 12:29 PM


Men...HA..who needs em?? Oh yeah, I guess we women do!!!   This echoes feelings that, as you know, I have felt. I only hope the pain of this one will subside, and you'll find true love with one who will have as beautiful a heart as you do. In the meantime, let's go to N'Awlins and paint the town red, okay??!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
8 posted 2001-10-27 01:39 PM




I'd give you love of Goddesses
to change your life into a dream
If only you would let me touch
that place within you hide from me.

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A wonderful eloquent expression of you precious heart which I hope would mend soon..

Take care sweet lady....
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doreen peri
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9 posted 2001-10-27 02:46 PM


lovely, sandra....

beautifully penned with overflowing love from your heart...

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sometimes a heart feels cracked in two
from words once said no longer spoken --
cracks are windows, though, into
a precious soul...... heart's can't be broken!
true, the emptiness of loss
is painful when the crack is bleeding,
yet the healing brings anew
a deeper love to come, exceeding
every heaven dreamed or spoken.
hearts heal stronger..... never broken.

(hehe... no, this isn't the one... not yet.. lol)

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2001-10-27 03:03 PM


Wow, that was a cool poem Doreen, I'm keeping it. And yeah, Tracey we gotta go have some fun. Hey anyone else want to go?
Sandra

doreen peri
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11 posted 2001-10-27 06:30 PM


i do!!

where we goin'?

i'm ready!  

woohoo!!


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