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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-10-26 04:22 PM



It only takes
for you to say
that you love me
And here I go again
out in the open
unprotected
but so in love
Take my heart
is yours
I hold no defenses
I'm yours
Knowing
I'm willing
to give you all
without any promises
at all.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-10-26 04:29 PM


I know this feeling all too well, walker. Sometimes I feel like a dog begging for a bone...(WHOA...bad analogy   )But you KNOW what I mean! (I swear sometimes this stuff just types itself!   )

Enjoyed.  

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just out of reach
2 posted 2001-10-26 04:36 PM


walker - once again well said. ejoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-10-26 05:00 PM


Very nicely said Walker.  ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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4 posted 2001-10-26 05:24 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet Walker, you are a true romantic! (sigh) All of your loving promises shine deep down in your heart, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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5 posted 2001-10-26 08:52 PM


*sigh* a sensitive and loving offer. How tenderly you have put it. This poem cannot help but leave the heart feeling it has been touched by something incredibly wonderful. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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