Open Poetry #16 |
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Lead me..... |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Lead me to the twilight delta where every bubble speaks- and tongues wag artlessly on streams. Lead me to the honeycomb- where kisses cultivate in bleak stages until they burst bittersweet. Lead me there. Lead me to Chesapeake Bay where inland, I untie my grief, release my sail- and fling my shells and stones into the air! Lead me to the embers- the sugar fires; to the driftwood.. Dip my fingers in maple- sweeten your flesh with spiral strokes… Lead me to our bed, Dream away my body, mind and spirit. Shower me in rosewater- love me, lest I stop believing. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-26-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) You will not drown in sorrow, but rather drown in ecstacy when all these beautiful visions appear before your eyes! (sigh) Soooooooo beautifully captivating, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa. Is everybody on the sensual kick? I LOVE it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...this is beautifully written, so fueled by emotion and a sensual longing. Lovely! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Noah, you are a doll, thank you Interloiper, thank you Martie, thank you I am SO glad you liked it. maybe it IS sensual because I'm writing uninhibited for the first time in my life, oh God, it feels so wonderful..... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I felt lots of love and passion from this, very inspirational. You write beautifully. Sandra |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Lady of Shallot - This is just beautiful! Going in my library. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lead me to your bed, Dream away my body, mind and spirit. Plunge me in deeper waters, lest I drown before I believe it can happen. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I love this!!! What a beautiful write. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
guide your heart. . . from your heart. . . thank you for this one. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very soft and sensual, lovely, lovely, lovely.... ![]() Greeneyes~ **** I keep my ideals, |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Sandra, thank you so much... Chris, I'm honored and thank you Nancy, thank you for replying, I'm thrilled you liked it. Sven, yes, from the heart, thank you Greeneyes, thank you dear -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes - peace.....to all, at last.... Kathleen nickname "Kay" "Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently." [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-26-2001).] |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, good. bumpers. Admiring you at Passions. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
let me lead you there I will take you to great heights then take you again Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
thank you all, and Interloper? Be my guest! (poetically, I mean ![]() -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
poetic license a great credential to have and an open mind Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
you lead and I will follow ![]() -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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