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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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Truth Revealed Remove your mask of deception Slip off your cloak of bold lies Your costume is frayed and transparent I can see through your feeble disguise. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And see the wall on the other side, no doubt  Well said!Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interloper - thankyou for reading this and commenting. My muse has been on holiday, and I have been actually frightened to post. Strange isn't it......our wanting to fit in? Hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Chris...This is soooo well done! You do these so cleverly 'Cricket'! OH!! It just came to me... "Take off the mask! Oh you already have it off"...gee, it's Dad! Hope he didn't read my kissie poem.  Love ya! 'Teed'  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Confront the truth to be sure Excellent |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Never fear We are here to hear your song, with or without a disguise. Chris, I really like this. Glad to see you bravely posting. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
NancyLee..lol....I thought of Dad too while I was writing this. Thanks & hugs. Rex- Many thanks for reading and commenting. Midnitesun..what a lovely comment..thankyou!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Can I wait till after Halloween? Enjoyed your rhyme. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
RSWells - sure you can!! lol. Thankyou for commenting. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Nightshade you are the one wearing a lampshade over your head hehehe...nice write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Walt - I might be wearing the lampshade...but where is the bulb I handed to you..lol...thanks sweetie. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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