Open Poetry #16 |
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Windy Wile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Windy Wile For me the twilight holds more night I ride within this lovely light. I travel on my quests of do And meet head on all problems new. I challenge all my wakeful bare With resolute and daring dare I am the champion of my dreams And fill each scene with conquest seem. All villains fall before my lance There’s nothing left accursed chance I wear the favor of a maid And meet with her in favors glade. We drink the wine of ghostly grape She lies upon my phantoms cape And we exchange our lover’s soul Until the sun dries up the goal It’s a half-life of windy wile Half-life that always brings a smile. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved the entire poem, but the "half-life" reference? Well, it did me in. Thanks for the coffee, sy... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For me the twilight holds more night I ride within this lovely light. ================================== All villains fall before my lance There’s nothing left accursed chance I wear the favor of a maid And meet with her in favors glade. We drink the wine of ghostly grape She lies upon my phantoms cape And we exchange our lover’s soul Until the sun dries up the goal It’s a half-life of windy wile Half-life that always brings a smile. ================================== and YOU me sweet Stinky... YOU are OUR morning wile...you are our morning smile NOW... who is this Maid?????? tell her I said get off my cape and stop drinking my grape hehehehe Ya got me gator girls all riled & jealous this morn ![]() Feeling rather Randy myself today ![]() ![]() ![]() This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
then beneath phantom's cape red she solemn stops me in my stead whispers shared between us two as the raspberry tea is brewed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YEAH... SEE ... SUNSHINE KNOWS... Forget the grape baby... THINK RASPBERRY ROFL ![]() *WINKIEWINKIE* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I hope there was enough cream and sugar in the coffee? LOL *L* JM, This maid? Why it's maid Butterfly of course. I will explain in my poem tomorrow. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Now would I ever give you RASPBERRIES? Certainly not. I'd serve you raspberry tea and raspbery jam but never just Raspberries. ROFL Love you, Randy Stinky. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are the light of my day. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dont forget the raspberry Pop-tarts me sweet ROFL teehee *winkiewinkie* ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, How could I forget the pop tarts? I keep some on Randy's back all the time. WW |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
AHH -- You spoil me Stinky... you and Randy take such good care of me *L* love ya both ![]() Have a great day me sweet Sy-babes ![]() |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
In the end, a smile is really what matters, isn't it?...Way to go, Sy.. ![]() [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, You are a whole bouquet of smiles. *L* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahh so very very lovely Seymour... it's always a pleasure to read you ![]() Maree ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well, this is very interesting and I would love to sit upon thy cape and have a glass or two...but, I am more than interested in meeting Randy. Hummm, the plot thickens. Excellent write by the way. Hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* you took me to a magic land and fed me raspberries and cream.......mmmmmmmm good. I love it. You guys are such a blast. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful! Such chivalry and middle age romance fills this sweet vision, and winning a lady's heart! (smiles) Made me think of feeding raspberries and strawberries and cream to my girl, and she eats them and sucks the juice off my fingers happily! (smiles) Soooooo beautiful, sweet Seymour, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, And it's always a pleasure to read your comments. *L* Nancy, Randy is a dandy, but i'll mention your interested. LOL *L* Startime, Wait the best is yet to come. Mistletoe, Thank you and May love and light always shine upon you! *L* |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Seymour, Does that cape ever take a break. I'm thinkin' I'd like to borrow it! ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Enjoyed this, my friend. Gave me a smile. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really enjoyed this one and all the subsequent comments, and there is more to come? Can't wait! ![]() ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Each one of us has his or her own cape. Vicky, Giving smiles is one of my goals. *L* Mysteria, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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