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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-31 04:33 AM


Asking For What I Want

I want you
to love me.
Yes you...
The person I
love talking to.
The woman that I love.
The beautiful woman I
can't get enough of.
Yes you are the one
that I love.
This is true.
And more than
anything...
in this world
I want you
to love me
too.

JamesLee
October31
2001
forJin


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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
1 posted 2001-10-31 06:38 AM


AAaaawwwww! A song James! So sincere yet very to the point. I hope she meets your every dream and adds light years to your happiness.

Sincerely,
Regina

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-10-31 08:44 AM


Such a sweet thing to say to the lady of your dreams. I hope she gives you the same joyful declaration. Sweetly romantic. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-31 08:49 AM


Enjoyed James...very lovely thoughts here, ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-10-31 03:34 PM


I bet she does, James.. Nice write. Share it with her..
Sandra

Amber Dawn
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since 2001-10-31
Posts 22
Minnesota
5 posted 2001-10-31 04:02 PM


Very tender write........and gentle.  Very nice.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-10-31 04:41 PM




Very tender and loving write...

Lovely ....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2001-10-31 04:43 PM


James, I love when you write like this  
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