Open Poetry #16 |
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Losing Ground |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
![]() Losing Ground population lines southern of northern walkings feet craving plains swish public never sees Indian grasses glisten calling back to me undercurrents flow vortexed thoughts impeding knowns Hawk is southerly homebound at dusking creamy underfeathers brush rush of worries pall in silent sailing black eyes feed on populace unsuspecting needs northern lands plighted encroaching boundaries take Redtail winging on Deer’s hooves clicking sounds ‘Possum, ‘Coon and Fox fenced in city’s not a home once bountiful lands tarring black Ground Squirrel’s nest relinquishing roots perceive grassland’s pulse concrete won’t feed the Nations give Hawk back its home Image courtesy Passions in Poetry |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() YES YES YES Share fairly with nature or lose it all. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Spirits walking... 'perceive grassland’s pulse concrete won’t feed the Nations give Hawk back its home' Whether anyone else wants to admit it or not, the tears of the past ... fall on today~ Thank you gentle friend~ *Hugs* from my heart to yours~ ~*WillowWhiteFeather*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Karilea, this is so so pretty! (smiles) I love Native American culture and nature, for part of my ancestry is Cherokee Indian; all the rest is Irish. (smiles) No fast-food restaurant or road will ever surpass the beauty and glory of this beautiful land! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing! may love and light always shine upon you! Love, Naoh Eaton |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Put a $100 bill on every acre ... although the beauty of nature is breathtaking and the inspiration of countless poets ... the power of the almighty buck glistens above all else, when the eye of the prophet scans the horizon ![]() [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I think Rex said what I would "have liked to say", how true this is, and well said by you. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write. |
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