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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2001-10-25 12:16 PM

I walk along a country lane,
...in dark of eve's unfold,
Forever lost in silent screams,
...in stories never told,
Tales of trampled innocence,
...dark demons ever kept,
Amidst the pain of haunting sorrows,
...as silent angels wept,
From forth the darkness evil leapt,
...came one to one with sin,
Skin to skin, hate's piercing sting,
...hate lances deep within,
I walk along a country lane,
...in dark of eve's unfold,
As echoes of a rising wind,
...cry stories never told.

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2001-10-25 12:19 PM

Tim--haunting and sad..this road. wonderful writing!

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-10-25 01:06 AM

Tim,

Very haunting tale you have told here.

Dawn

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-10-25 01:29 AM

Tim don't walk alone, I'll walk with you...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-25 03:56 AM

"Forever lost in silent screams,
...in stories never told,"

Sadly, there are so many silent screamers out there, whose stories will never be told. But with the help of your words, perhaps a muffled scream at least could be heard, and felt, and some lost soul may be comforted somewhere along that country lane, and know they did not cry in vain.
It is a sad poem, but very beautifully written.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA