Open Poetry #16 |
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Sunshine |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London ![]() |
Sunshine ~~~ As droplets cling fast to an icicle their silent plea echoes in vain A mist gently lifts as the blade reaps the sun And a tear wets the earth once again ~~~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh a nice write |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Rex, you've done it again, your beautiful visions glisten right before my eyes! (sigh) I saw the icicles melting softly in joy as the sunshine blessed all of nature around and it wept tears of joy that blanket the ground! (smiles) You always make me smile with your beautiful words! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Rex!! You know how I love these short and to the point beautiful ones!! This one is terrific! I'm keeping it....Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunning is the only word I can come up with to tell how this poem makes me feel. I flowed through the vision of it and loved the whole thing. BRAVO!!! ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Leaving poets smiling, are you? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
![]() very warm! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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