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Vanilla Dreams |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Vanilla scented atmosphere so sweetly warming, without fear the candles glow and incense burns fulfillment of my stongest yearn. Long awaited vanilla kiss holding the key to all I miss opens the doors which set us free But I'm the only one who sees. Vanilla dreams turn misty blue as I am torn away from you our day will come, I swear it will vanilla candles burn until. I believe this is heaven to no one else but me, and I will defend it as long as I'm left here to linger in silence...Sara McLachlan |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!There is a lot of determination in this poem and I think you will make it your reality. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I see you writing forever into your heart or a start to writing slowly out of your heart Either way I feel the emotion within ... I see the joy and the sorrow Hang in Rex |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, A lovely write, enjoyed |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
i enjoyed this i caught the feeling of longing and hope wish i could write some thing cheerful arthur |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"Vanilla scents candles glow the key you seek lets your dreams flow" Determination is the least I see, but undying love ... sets this free. This leaves a good taste on my lips, a pleasure to read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Advantages of Vanilla... A t morning's break, in myst-like fog D reams lost unto the real now borne V isions dancing, harvesting scenes A cross ocean of words, canvassed N akedthoughts doth embrace, enchant T ouch silent, cloak, scent images A float in mind of time, of want G roans of desire spilling over E dges, rising to meet the dark S culpting ever so strangely as o ften times you would appear, f orbidden, yet grand in stature V oicing, thy sweetness of words, once A mid seductive spell, to grace N ight visions of dark catching flight I n thine eyes, a touch, pale caress L ingering, upon lips, passions L onging, lasting well into nights A cross indigo darkness comes the advantages of vanilla... Cat...reminded me of this one I wrote awhile back..I use vanilla scents all the time, bubbles, creams..shampoo and candles..my favorite scent ~Wynter ...a repost "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone, and Wynter WOW, what a cool poem Sandra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sandra, You do rhyme so well and I especially enjoyed this one. Thanks! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lots of promise, lots of heart, and a very smooth read as well. Well done and a joy to read. Keep smilin' and keep stretchin'. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Lovely fragrant verse~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when vanilla meets cinnamon. . . candles burn brighter. . . love the longing in this one Sandra. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo romantic and sweet, dearest Sandra! Your words are always soooooo beautiful and so romantically surreal! (kiss on cheek) Muah! We al love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OH, yes! Vanilla. I love anything dipped in the scent of vanilla. Cookies, ice cream, cake, candles.....absolutely anything vanilla. And a yummy poem too! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
opens the doors which set us free But I'm the only one who sees Dontcha just hate when that happens? Why can't he see, dammit? our day will come, I swear it will vanilla candles burn until Perfect imagery there. Great write Sandra. I really like this. Your trip has certainly inspired some great poetry If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh how lovely! I could almost smell those candles, as your words were so sweet. This was lovely and so romantic. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Cat, your delicate expression of longing and inner strength in determination make this poem an exquisite read4me2nite... TeddyBearHugs2uMyFriend *~coco~* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write...must get me some of those vanilla candles. ~smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet vanilla dream have failed me once again.  S |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Vanilla......wow.... I loved it.....soooooo sweet.... But why did your sweet Vanilla dream fail you dear? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I enjoyed reading it. All we can do is just keep trying. |
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