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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-10-24 06:12 PM



Find your balance
then come back to me
I'll be here waiting
for you to be
the lover I need
I don't ask for much
just for you to love me
To remember me when the tide is high
To return to me each night
I won't ask you questions
about your return
I'll just give you love
as long as you promise
to love me back some

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-10-24 07:00 PM


Oh yeah, so much, so true. But it doesn't seem to wrok for me, all that unconditional love, and I get dumped on every time.
Sigh..
Nice poem though, very loving.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-10-24 07:07 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, this is such a beautiful promise and love you deserve indeed, for unconditional love is the sweetest love of all! (sigh) May your love give you all your heart desires just as you do! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
3 posted 2001-10-24 08:57 PM


*sigh* love is definitely a two way street and you deserve to be loved back some. A wonderful poem of love and romance. Well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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