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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2001-10-18 11:15 PM

Looking for inspiration
I thought of you
the love of my life

has not turned out to be
the love of my days

though you are still
it’s aspiration.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-10-18 11:19 PM

Duncan~
You're 'sandbagging' again~

Wonderfully done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-18 11:20 PM

*giggling* lucky lady to have inspired this little verse.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-18 11:23 PM

Duncan, I think you have your inspiration right there!! Well done as usual!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-18 11:25 PM

Breathe in, breathe out.
Reach in and out.
Inspiration, aspiration.

This one reaches deep.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-10-18 11:33 PM

This speaks..volumes. I know this feeling all too well. Every last word.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-10-19 07:18 AM

I'm sure she still is the love of your nights.Really beautiful poem here Duncan.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-19 07:24 AM

You have said so much, in so few words Duncan ... beautifully composed! I very much enjoyed this tender piece.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-10-19 07:57 AM

very nicely done.... concise...and telling

so much in so few words... love this type of poetry....

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-10-24 02:53 AM

Duncan-
   I'm liking this one lots.
   Short and sweet but says much.
   Very well done, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2001-10-24 03:02 AM

Duncan,
You always find ways to make those certain little things palatable. Good talent.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

11 posted 2001-10-24 06:57 PM

I love this! IT's wonderful....

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2001-10-24 08:51 PM

Oh yes, you said it.
Sandra

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