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A Burden
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A Burden |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Burden I shall never be a burden lading weight of me, upon, nor the tensing of a furrowed brow of those, my love's built on. An albatross around your neck, 'tis not, I'll ever be. I'd rather kiss with words, "Goodbye" and fly with wings from thee. I dream of angels in the night who gather up their flock. Saving them from hurt and harm, no living by the clock. And see them in the shadows light, nearing bedside, mine. I shall never be a burden nor a thought, between a line. Holding stone, a wishing, one of two the other held by you. With a longing, sometimes leaning toward a need for eyes of blue. But the distance seems to wander off becoming endless reach, when all I have to hold onto are words of written speech. I shall print my heartsworth feelings placing them in pages, pure. I shall never be a burden even though, I love you more. "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you are no burden light as a feather you are a refreshing breeze Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I do not believe you would be able to carry me up the staircase today.... thanks, Tall one ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Your words lift and are filled with beauty and light....never could you be a burden....you are too loved to be consider so.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such a beautiful romantic poem, sweet Wynter! (smiles) May unconditional love be in your sweet forever and be your life's only sweet soft burden! (smiles) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Naoh Eaton |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Yes, the last thing I would ever want to be to anyone is a burden....but, Maureen, you could never be. You are too good of a person, honest, outgoing, giving... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you're like a bird you'll only fly away o yuh!! nice poem alot i like it |
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RocketRide Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 13USA |
as judged by such wisdom, you could indeed, never be a burden. perhaps a burden to bad thoughts, but that is as far as it would go... ~~Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the little voice at the end of the day that says...I'll try again tommorrow~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
nkdthoughts, nor a thought, between a line. Good for you! And besides, burdens are meant to be shared. Nice poem.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Once again, I thank you each for taking the time to read and comment on my words. At times I feel unworthy of your kindness. M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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