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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-23 10:28 AM

PASSIONS
Palatable is the kiss on lips, Pleasing
Absorbing essense setting flesh Aflame
Sensual touch leaves trails of Sensations
Seduced by fingers of fire that Shiver
Ignited by this act of Indulgence
Opening to the emotions Onslaught
Nectar of Gods, fulfilling Nourishment
Savoring PASSIONS that leave me Shaken

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

1 posted 2001-10-23 10:37 AM

can I have a sip, oh heck, give me a huge goblet of this stuff!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-23 10:38 AM

Wonderfully passionate write!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2001-10-23 10:47 AM

my!
now that is a fair head of steam!!!!
arthur

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-10-23 10:51 AM

From front to back, end to end, this is a wonderful Acrostic of Passion's blend...

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2001-10-23 11:02 AM

"Well indeed
this I enjoyed
steamy read
PASSION's unvoid"

Enjoyed greatly!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-10-23 11:14 AM

This is so good!
I never even thought of a double acrostic, and it ROCKS!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2001-10-23 11:17 AM

mmm yes the tasty love potion
sensually edxpressed
Hope

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-10-23 03:31 PM

Nothing like some good kissin to stir up the passion's...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-10-23 03:51 PM

StarTime~
Very, very nicely done~
*hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-10-23 04:37 PM

Wow Karen, you are writing such beautiful
poetry....I am truly impressed. well done
lady.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-10-23 05:10 PM

Fantastic! Great job on this one...
May I please have a jug??

Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2001-10-23 10:10 PM

You said it, lady..

Sandra

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

13 posted 2001-10-23 10:39 PM

It's great, isn't it?

God bless America, my home sweet home.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

14 posted 2001-10-25 07:10 AM

OOOOoooooo! I love to make this happen!!! I'd take a week of that!

Great stuff!

Sincerely,
Regina

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

15 posted 2001-10-25 07:14 AM

Oh, I want one of these kisses, sounds delectable. Oh yeah right, can't have one alone...I'll just have to use your poem and my imagination to remember what it was like!! LOL

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

16 posted 2001-10-25 10:02 AM

Karen; Now, I think I would like a cup or two of this nectar myself. Good writing Karen, as always. Wanda

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