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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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PASSIONS Palatable is the kiss on lips, Pleasing Absorbing essense setting flesh Aflame Sensual touch leaves trails of Sensations Seduced by fingers of fire that Shiver Ignited by this act of Indulgence Opening to the emotions Onslaught Nectar of Gods, fulfilling Nourishment Savoring PASSIONS that leave me Shaken Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
can I have a sip, oh heck, give me a huge goblet of this stuff! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderfully passionate write! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
my! now that is a fair head of steam!!!! arthur |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
From front to back, end to end, this is a wonderful Acrostic of Passion's blend... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"Well indeed this I enjoyed steamy read PASSION's unvoid" Enjoyed greatly!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 This is so good! I never even thought of a double acrostic, and it ROCKS!  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
mmm yes the tasty love potion sensually edxpressed Hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nothing like some good kissin to stir up the passion's...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Very, very nicely done~  *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Karen, you are writing such beautiful poetry....I am truly impressed. well done lady. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic! Great job on this one... May I please have a jug??  Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You said it, lady..  Sandra |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It's great, isn't it?  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
OOOOoooooo! I love to make this happen!!! I'd take a week of that! Great stuff!Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh, I want one of these kisses, sounds delectable. Oh yeah right, can't have one alone...I'll just have to use your poem and my imagination to remember what it was like!! LOL If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Karen; Now, I think I would like a cup or two of this nectar myself. Good writing Karen, as always. Wanda |
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