Open Poetry #16 |
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Dark Star |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
It spakled brightly just last week, and now has gone behind the clouds with almost nothing left to show my star is black, a looming shroud. Such stars can brighten all the night or take away your only love My star is dark tonight, tis true Tomorrow may it glow above. I believe this is heaven to no one else but me, and I will defend it as long as I'm left here to linger in silence...Sara McLachlan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Here's hoping for tomorrow and brighter stars. *Hugs* If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My star is dark tonight, tis true Tomorrow may it glow above. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm sure it will...enjoyed! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, it will, I know it just will, and you will be showered with showers of shooting stars of sweet true love! (smiles) This I wish for you, sweetest friend! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful evening, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
It may be darkest before the dawn, but it is still dark. I like the last line, it shows the hope for the dawn. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I never actually saw it in this way,your heart is deep. If you do not catch that glow, let me know. I will rub a couple of stars together and pray for a spark! **s** |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Or perhaps another star, my sweet friend. *hugs* to you. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I think someone out there may see you as the sun! ![]() Sincerely, Regina |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Don't forget to look a little to your left there may be a star shining there that you have missed. Maybe tomorrow you will let it light the skies of your heart. Take care, my friend, and look for hope in your tomorrow. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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