Open Poetry #16 |
Dark Star |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It spakled brightly just last week, and now has gone behind the clouds with almost nothing left to show my star is black, a looming shroud. Such stars can brighten all the night or take away your only love My star is dark tonight, tis true Tomorrow may it glow above. I believe this is heaven to no one else but me, and I will defend it as long as I'm left here to linger in silence...Sara McLachlan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Here's hoping for tomorrow and brighter stars. *Hugs* If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My star is dark tonight, tis true Tomorrow may it glow above. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm sure it will...enjoyed! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, it will, I know it just will, and you will be showered with showers of shooting stars of sweet true love! (smiles) This I wish for you, sweetest friend! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful evening, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
It may be darkest before the dawn, but it is still dark. I like the last line, it shows the hope for the dawn. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I never actually saw it in this way,your heart is deep. If you do not catch that glow, let me know. I will rub a couple of stars together and pray for a spark! **s** |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Or perhaps another star, my sweet friend. *hugs* to you. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I think someone out there may see you as the sun! You still shine if even in glimmer. Sincerely, Regina |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Don't forget to look a little to your left there may be a star shining there that you have missed. Maybe tomorrow you will let it light the skies of your heart. Take care, my friend, and look for hope in your tomorrow. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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