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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-23 10:17 PM


It spakled brightly just last week,
and now has gone behind the clouds
with almost nothing left to show
my star is black, a looming shroud.

Such stars can brighten all the night
or take away your only love
My star is dark tonight, tis true
Tomorrow may it glow above.

I believe this is heaven to no one else but me, and I will defend it as long as I'm left here to linger in silence...Sara McLachlan

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-23 10:24 PM


Here's hoping for tomorrow and brighter stars. *Hugs*

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-10-23 10:42 PM


My star is dark tonight, tis true
Tomorrow may it glow above.
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I'm sure it will...enjoyed!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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3 posted 2001-10-23 10:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, it will, I know it just will, and you will be showered with showers of shooting stars of sweet true love! (smiles) This I wish for you, sweetest friend! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful evening, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-10-23 11:06 PM


It may be darkest before the dawn, but it is still dark.  I like the last line, it shows the hope for the dawn.
Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

ctowen
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5 posted 2001-10-23 11:15 PM


I never actually saw it in this way,your heart is deep. If you do not catch that glow, let me know. I will rub a couple of stars together and pray for a spark! **s**

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By the sea
6 posted 2001-10-24 01:16 AM


Or perhaps another star, my sweet friend. *hugs* to you.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

rwood
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7 posted 2001-10-25 07:02 AM


I think someone out there may see you as the sun!   You still shine if even in glimmer.

Sincerely,
Regina

Startime
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8 posted 2001-10-25 09:32 AM


Don't forget to look a little to your left there may be a star shining there that you have missed. Maybe tomorrow you will let it light the skies of your heart. Take care, my friend, and look for hope in your tomorrow.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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