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RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2001-10-24 02:43 PM

Your soft lips draw me near to you
As I gaze into your eyes
I know the love we share is true
Open and Undisguised

My finger tips trace over your face
As I whisper in your ear
"I love you honey" as we embrace
Are the words that you will hear

I take you in my arms
And pull you closer to me
I'll tell you of your many charms
As we kiss so tenderly

I will always cherish the day we met
And began sharing our love with eachother
A day my mind could never forget
For there will never be another

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-24-2001).]

BtwnRockandHardPlace
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
NJ, USA

1 posted 2001-10-24 02:53 PM

It's perfect. Thank you.

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.

-Gen. Norman Schwarzkoff

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-25-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-24 03:09 PM

(sigh) Oh Joanna, this is so so sweet, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) You always write sweet love so well! (kiss on cheek) Beautiful!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2001-10-24 03:19 PM

I still remember the first few days of love ... their memories have been etched in walls of my heart

Enjoyed your thoughts

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-10-24 03:21 PM

Wonderful memories

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-24 03:29 PM

Yeah, I remember those feelings. Nice,...Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2001-10-24 03:41 PM

Lovely sentiments, well written. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

7 posted 2001-10-24 04:25 PM

I remember those feelings! In fact I still receive them now. Loved the poem!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-10-24 04:32 PM

So romantically enticing...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-10-24 04:39 PM

Very well expressed love for another. I wish
you that you may always have this happiness
in your heart.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-10-24 05:36 PM

enjoyed it a lot

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2001-10-24 05:53 PM

Love it.

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

12 posted 2001-10-24 07:55 PM

Love like the one you spoke about in your poem is rare this day and time..... i see by the posts that this poem has touched many a person and that they also share similar instances where love has been great to them too..... Great poem

GhostWriter_6

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2001-10-24 08:16 PM

Sweet and very tender

Maree

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2001-10-24 08:22 PM

*sigh* isn't love grand. BRAVO!!!!This is a poem everyone can easily relate to. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

15 posted 2001-10-24 10:04 PM

Lovely RosePetal, lovely. So romantic and pretty

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

16 posted 2001-10-25 12:52 PM

Whoa, I didnt think my poem was going to get this much feedback...Thank you very much my dear friends!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2001-10-26 12:23 PM

RosePetal,
If it weren't for love...
Nicely done!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

18 posted 2001-10-26 12:39 PM

I love this

it's softly romantic~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

19 posted 2001-10-31 02:50 PM

RosePetal-
   Such lovely thoughts you've penned.
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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