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Read my silence
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Read my silence |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ten days of conversation levity and flirting waking to morning mail is my favorite through the day I think of you at the most random of times there is no sense or sensibility to this so that now as I try to put something into words for you I find too much in my heart for my tired mind today I ask if you will simply read my silence |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so that now as I try to put something into words for you I find too much in my heart for my tired mind today I ask if you will simply read my silence ======================== VERY VERY COOL write Duncan... "read my silence" .. how sexy is that..  I like your stlye poet sir...direct and to the point... and Duncan? ... If "this" made "sense" ... it wouldnt be half as inspiring and intriguing. *L* This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There are times when words simply aren't necessary, and the silence between two people speaks for itself. Nice! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderfully said in a good format, Duncan. I hope she reads.  All writing comes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Silence can often say more than words. Trust me in this Duncan, she does understand. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I started to shut this off and go on to bed, but I'm glad I read it. For some odd reason, I found comfort in it. Thank you for posting this. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
When volumes of thought ring from your mind She’ll understand silence, I think you will find For much can be said without any words I think if you ask her, she’ll tell you she heard Yes She reads the words between your silence If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, I have this suspicion she heard you, loud and clear. Great write. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed this, Duncan... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
today I ask if you will simply read my silence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Duncan, the most comforting and beautiful words I have read so far this evening. Thank you for this one. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how lovely, thankyou for this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
DUNCAN..silence has its moments too those words that cloak themselves in silence are often the most important ones..and if she hears them......ah, you have something.... enjoyed... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
As always, you can say the most poignant things in the simplest ways...find the woman who can read silence and you rule the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes silence is the best way to communicate. Great poem. |
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Amber Dawn Junior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 22Minnesota |
Really nice form. Silence speaks in many ways. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ This is very, very effective~ A real enjoy !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this a lot, but one word of advice, sometimes..women don't understand the silence and take it for disinterest.. Speaking from experience of course. Great write. Sandra |
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