In The Candlelight (Sonnet)

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Open Poetry #16

In The Candlelight (Sonnet)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-24 01:43 PM

In The Candlelight (Sonnet)
By: Noah Eaton
9/5/01

Lay down beside me and I'll touch your lips
Hearing you breathe next to me in delight
Caressing velvet flesh, tracing your hips
Close your eyes, my love, as I touch your thighs
The stars dance in your glimmering heart
Tossing angels hair across your warm face
I share your reverie, which will never part
Smother me in your sweet heather and lace
Lure me into your arms, my sweet red rose
You are the angel I lovingly hold
I'll kiss your eyelids as we gently doze
Under satin sheets seductive in gold
In the candlelight, I'll make love to you
Whispering paradise to love so true...

insect
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since 2000-04-22

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1 posted 2001-10-24 02:17 PM

Very beautiful poem!
This flickers in radiance

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-10-24 02:20 PM

Oh This sounds so beautiful Noah!

Feeling the heat of your body next to mine
It's a comfort I've never felt before
We hold eachother passing the time
Sharing sweet love so pure

just thought I'd add a poetic response : )

BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
NJ, USA

3 posted 2001-10-24 02:25 PM

Noah,

I love these words, so very touching. It makes me long for my true love to be here with me now.

Peace,

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.

-Gen. Norman Schwarzkoff

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-25-2001).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-24 02:32 PM

Beautiful, romantic, and sensual write Noah.
Enjoyed, ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2001-10-24 03:10 PM

i think its great yuh

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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6 posted 2001-10-24 03:20 PM

Sounds like a sweet love, Noah.
I'm happy for you, if it's yours.
Sandra

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