Open Poetry #16 |
Passions' Proud Poets |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Passions’ Proud Poets one wrote of how his Lady cried, one soon wrote her troubled cry one wrote of her need to return to blue then one penned of some things to do soon one found her voice again then she wrote of where, and when he wrote, wending his thoughts along soon he lifted their hearts in song she wrote of anger, and of tears’ sum, they held to faith, told fear, “begone!” one wrote of red, come white, come blue, all penning hope, as only they do as dust settled, and all saw more quietly, silently, they’ll even the score by lifting hearts, souls, and awesome pride matched only by an ocean’s tide… so if a poet, in days to come hears his pounding heart’s patriotic hum then casts a memory of Passion’s hue look around…and see, it’s you… for all picked up their pen to write their stance so tall, in their unite |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So very true Lady Sunshine...never were there a finer group of people and who better to express the feelings of the world than poets. Excellent writing~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As did you poetess K...as did you.... Good Sunday morning Sun... your glow has been missed. join me for a cup of hot tea you know what kind *S* Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully composed Karilea ... so many have written and found solace and release. It's been my pleasure and healing to read so many of our friend's hearts here ... you included dear lady. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
We as family all unite, with passion words go on and fight We tell the tales of heart-felt truth, cry tears for the old, the youth We try with words a void to fill, ponder on ill deed and will Show compassion, point of view, share our thoughts in what we do Great write Sunshine, once again you have brought the sunshine to my day. Hope you are well. Sincerely Rick |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
One Passionate voice sings loud and clear... Nicely said, dear K... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Nicely done Sunshine..i enoyed the read alan |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wonderful!...As even you have contributed to the fold. Moments of sharing heartbeats, scribed with one pen. I love this Sunshine. Thank you so much. Sincerely, Regina |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
ltns...We have so many to be proud of here, yourself included. Thank you for sharing your heart. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - well said, and touching to me... BC |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As always you shine girl. Great poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A good write, enjoyed the read. *L* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hi Sunshine! I just joined. I like your poem. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah yes. A wonderful poem about the best group of people I know! Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned Sunshine!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at you Kari...and only somewhat silently! Thank you. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine, warm hugs to you this is wonderful |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I am honored to be a part of such a special and wonderful group. . . thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There you go again shining that warm light all over the chilly world I agree 100% Passions is Home |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~so if a poet, in days to come hears his pounding heart’s patriotic hum then casts a memory of Passion’s hue look around…and see, it’s you… for all picked up their pen to write their stance so tall, in their unite~ ...look around...and see..it's you...and especially with you....with your warm sunbeams all over these bleu pages... (( hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Lovely, as always, sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And you also wrote! I am so proud to be accepted as part of such a talented, friendship circle of poets. Thank you for this one Sunshine. ~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--The front we hold is more than gold. Your words are so uplifting, sweet friend...thank you for your shinning! |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
Very sweet and wonderful poem. You're a wonderful writer, and im glad you wrote a poem such as this! *hug* A Life without Love, is no life at all... |
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