»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #16
»
October's Last Light
| Open Poetry #16 |
|
October's Last Light |
|
|
Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan 
|
The leaves fall in October’s last light. Above the smoky roofs, the last robin now takes flight. The children run and dance and sing. Enjoying life again, and not wanting for anything. In October’s last light, my heart dreams. And you’re back again, everything is just as it seems. My heart beats like a love-struck child’s. Looking for that solace from the Winter’s wind so wild. October’s last light really isn’t moon or sun. It’s that Twilight ray that is together both and none. And when October’s last light fades from view, All I’m left with are these memories, and not with you. passion is life. . . ~Diana [This message has been edited by Passions Voice (edited 10-24-2001).] |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Diana Athena - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Diana, this is so sad but also so beautiful and touching! (sigh) I pray he may come back and together you can share all the months treasures together with your beautiful heart! (sigh) You always write so beautifully, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Diana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Naoh Eaton |
||
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well done...I am going back to read it again!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
||
|
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Indeed, that lovely twilight ray... well done, Deb! Thank you! |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write. Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
|
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A wonderful read ... with a gentle sadness  |
||
|
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A poignant write, hopefully November will offer reason for thanksgiving. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PassionsVoice~ Just lovely, sweet lady~ Good to see you, Diana~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
if mem'rys are good wrap yourself in warm recall if not then forget Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
||
|
Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Dear Lady. This is beautiful but sad. I think it is one of your best yet. (((HUGS))))Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
||
|
Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Thank you. The Fall has never been very good for me. Something about the leaves falling that just touches at the soul. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
||
|
Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Bump... breathtaking, Diana. Simply breathtaking. I am many. |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was so beautiful and so very romantic. Take care......Sue Suetang |
||
|
Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I think I know the feeling....this was lovely, Diana. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
