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Last Night
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Last Night |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA 
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 When you kissed me last night There was electricity It jumped from your lips to mine When we embraced Our body temperatures combined The heat began and passion flowed I felt your breath against my neck You whispered in my ear gentle words Your love for me you showed As you slowly touched my soft white skin My body melted beneath you I can think of no place I'd rather be Than in your arms, as you're holding me And we rocked back and forth in rhythm As only two lovers can Who are in tune with each other And when entwined in such a way The rapture did slowly build We climbed the mountain together, my love And when we reached the very peak Our desire to join in ecstasy Became fulfilled [This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-26-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and that is the way of it for lovers. How sensually beautiful this poem is. Thank you so much for sharing it today.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo sensually passionate! (sigh) Such love fills your beautiful words, sweet Benita! May your golden heart froever be filled with ecstacy! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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