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Pale Moon |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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Pale Moon by Michael Pale, ivory moon, you teasingly rise. Ascend the sky and bloom. Pour healing to these eyes. This limping spirit roams the night and often shouts that it be heard, but evening is deaf. It hears no word. Dew is that of teardrops, wept when none could see. I stumble through the sodden grass in hopes that I’ll find me. Michael Auguste~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Auguste - This is a moving poetic piece. I liked it!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And as you stumble, may the loving arms of the midnitesun reach out to catch you, to break your fall. Michael, can you tell I enjoyed this one! All is well? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Michael, I like this, and by the way, that thing you stumbled over, that was me, I already landed on the ground. While we are here, lets have some fun  Sandra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Chris, Thanks a lot. I really appreciate it. Kacy, What a nice thing to say and yes, all is well, my friend. Thank you. *hugs*Sandra, Woohoo! LOL Thank you, sweet friend. *hugs*Michael Auguste~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael: "I stumble through the sodden grass in hopes that I’ll find me." You are that lovely man looking at the moon and making poetry in your head...easy to find. Hugs! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A lovely soul searching poem Auguste, I searched. Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dew is that of teardrops, wept when none could see. I stumble through the sodden grass in hopes that I’ll find me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I enjoyed this very much! Hope all is well with you. Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael, as always dear sweet man, your words touch me once again. Wonderful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Micheal, I reallyyy like this one. I really really like this one. Wonderful write my friend.  Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooo beautiful and romantic, sweet friend! May the moonlight lead your shimmering heart to your sweet ladylove! (sigh) You always write so beautifully, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
all spirits roam the night, and stumble.....hopefully we find what we are looking for...Peace and HUGS  Greeneyes~ ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Dew is that of teardrops, wept when none could see. I stumble through the sodden grass in hopes that I’ll find me." oh I like this part best too....very well done Michael (((hugs))) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* there is nothing as romantic as gazing at the moon. Beautiful. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very well expressed, feelings of sadness but showing hope at end.And that is what matters we can't lose hope. Thanks for sharing. |
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