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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-10-24 11:06 AM

You are the one,
You are the one
Who showed me so many ways,
To light up my way,
Now you are besides me,
Giving me so much,
Loving me all long,
You set me free,
you set me free,
You set my heart and soul free,
you shine my days
with all the love you gave,
you set me free,
like you set a bird free,
And let It fly,
you set me free,
Set me free,
Now I am strong
that I can hold a key
to open up a door,
And walk through this door,
See so many lights
to shine up my eyes away,
You are the one
who set me free....
set me free

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 10-24-2001).]

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

1 posted 2001-10-24 11:30 AM

Fantastic! I love it!

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2001-10-24 11:46 AM

This was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

3 posted 2001-10-24 12:34 PM

Great poem, being set free to see life so much clearer is always a beautiful scenerio.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-10-24 01:51 PM

(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) Your love shines in this gorgeous poem and may his heart always set you free in joy! (sigh) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-10-24 01:58 PM

love scored again and we all smile when it does...enjoyed this and the thoughts inspiring it...

jwesley

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-10-24 04:03 PM

Enjoyed vandana...reminds me of a Christian song I learned long age...

He set me free.
Yes...he set me free.
He broke the bonds of prison for me.
I'm glory bound my Jesus to see.
Glory be to God he set me free.

James

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-10-24 04:04 PM

o yuh o yuh

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-24 04:09 PM

I like this...almost like a song. Well done!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-10-24 11:44 PM

Yes, this sings, it really does. What a heart warming poem you have penned. Lovely

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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