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Safer Havens
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Safer Havens |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Safer Havens one would think our safe havens were at the very least, lost as our dear ones are searching their lives seem grave, tempest tossed in calm days a step forward seemed the very thing to do now some take a wait and see to see what their leaders do for as we know, some leaders are circular bound, you see there are many levels of leaders, such as you, and me But call me not a leader, I'd rather guide you along let you trust your own instincts to find where you best belong now tell me what you know best for we'll leave our faults behind just for our sakes, there's no test we will speak what's on our mind comforting arms we'll hold out and still we'll gather all facts for certain truths shall guide us knowledge will help us react to be your own safe haven by word, or act, or good deed will gain you back a haven where you may place your needs I may be your safe haven willing hands I offer you seeing through black tempest's pitch it's the least that all might do ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 23 October 2001 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Karilea, yes indeed, we look up for each other, and while we care for ourselves, friends are always here to help one another! (smiles) Your heart shines like the sunshine you are for yourself and the love and compassion of us all! We all love you so much! (big hugggssssss) You have such a sweet heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Karilea..this is so very true. We all need helping hands at times. enjoyed your write as always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I'll follow that rule. Nice write enjoyed. *L* |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
I may be your safe haven willing hands I offer you seeing through black tempest's pitch it's the least that all might do Striking words, written so lovely.  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
With every word you write you embrace us all in the haven of your heart giving love and strength to those in need of some of your special sunlight. Magnificent poem, Sunshine, and so very you. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey, I like this Sunshine. Very good! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
yes, this is a very comforting thought this morning, thank you! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
none of us really wants to be a leader, but we'll usually slide into the front seat where and when necessary ... and nice to know that others will take their turn so we all learn new strengths, together or something like that |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Absolutely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, this is very beautifully done. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! Yet another enjoyable read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you know I loved this one, and will squeak it in on a read, for it is the least I can do Thank you Sunshine for this.~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
to be your own safe haven by word, or act, or good deed will gain you back a haven where you may place your needs Today's Wow award! This is really an incredible piece. Everything about it speaks talent. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Would you all please stand and give yourselves a round of applause, for your red, white and blue is showing, and I for one am very happy to be among your ranks! Thank you all! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... a ray of pure Sunshine. *S* |
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