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It's Too Late
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It's Too Late |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA 
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You say I'm distant... But you have no clue The depths of my soul I've longed to reveal to you I used to tell you everything My thoughts My feelings I opened up my heart But so often you weren't listening You didn't hear a single word I tried so hard to be heard I cried I pled I had to yell But still you were deaf My words like silent snow flakes fell I tried to make you feel my pain But still I was ignored And now you have lost my heart The love can't be restored You say I'm distant... You tell me, now, you're ready To listen to my plea But it's too late To give me what I need I tried to wait For you to tell me I was adored The time has passed I was ignored My love didn't last Because, Like all living things require My love needed to be fed It was not nutured or desired And now my love for you Is quite completely *DEAD* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Btwn, A powerful rebuke. Enjoyed the read. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was very good!!!!!!!!!! |
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