Open Poetry #16 |
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Autumn haiku (I hope) |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Slow floating brown leaves Cool autumn breeze shaking limbs Squirrels gather nuts This year’s autumn starts Bringing on the beginning Of winter’s cold start alan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nice one Alan! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
thanks enchantress |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alan~ Squirrels scurrying Banking fall's harvested goods Eats through the winter *You did yours PERFECTLY~ And inspirationally~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I WANT SUMMER BACK!!!! Nice poem though If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Marge..I have only written a couple of them. Tracey....so do I...I hate winter time |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no you sillies ![]() ![]() ![]() Alan, this is beautiful ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
November what SEA...mine is in DEC....I still don't like it |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
11-14 ![]() when is yours? I like December enough for the both of us ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
christmas...email me ok [This message has been edited by Alan (edited 09-23-2001).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that is wonderful did they seperate it from Christmas for you?? I would..... ![]() my dad's is on Thanksgiving a lot......it was last year |
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