Open Poetry #16 |
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My Valentine |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Go to sleep dreaming sweet nothings Wake up with looks of nightmares on my face But I know you're coming over Put on my clothes, wishing your hands were covering my skin instead As you hold me in your arms, I get close enough so that our eyelashes touch Slow dancing and eventually teasing each other on the couch The caress of your hands in my hair And your eyes giving me an enticing stare Velevet covers and satin sheets Lace canopy curtains and silk... As I awake upon your chest, I reminise about last night As you walk to the door I tell you good-bye I kiss you farewell but my mind is telling you to keep you here I shut the door and return to my pool of desire The scent of cologne and perfume smoother the satin I lay back, breathe in, and get high from the smells of love As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Put on my clothes, wishing your hands were covering my skin instead As you hold me in your arms, I get close enough so that our eyelashes touch ====================================== These are such soft and senually lovely thoughts... you have captured the passion and desire of such an interlude..chemistry between two and the essence and afterglow. loved the lines about the scents left behind, very well done jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Domzi~ Quietly done ... nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Thanks for the replies. This is one of my favorite writes. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
A Truly Great Poem...from a truly special poet.. |
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