Open Poetry #16 |
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My twenty or less..for you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Your face Your eyes Your nose Your smile All perfectly placed Makes me wish That I could hold Such a dish Skin so soft Angels cry From aloft Hard as they try They’ll never compare to you For in my eyes You are a rose You are perfect From your head to your toes alan |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*swoon* I feel faint........ ![]() Alan, this is wonderful!! ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
thanks Sea..if you faint..pick a soft spot to land.last time i checked the floor was hard... alan |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL ok, I'll be careful ![]() |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
smart lady ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow Alan , so perfect she must be one great lady Hope |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
She is Hope. Thanks for the reply sweet lady alan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Alan, this is lovely as well as being succint, I'm sure it would cause a fair maiden to swoon. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Kethry...I wrote this on te spur of the moment.it was written about no one in particular...although it would fit all the ladies here...I wrote it..trying to change my mood....thanks for your kind words alan |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wanted this in my library ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so sweet Alan ... very nicely expressed. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
very sweet! nicely done.. A Life without Love, is no life at all... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*swoon* Very well done Alan! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so sweet and pretty. It should be in a card. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your words Your heart Your mind So smart! I never knew I liked mush this much! Thanks for the sweetly scented breath of fresh air. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, Alan, a nice treat. Sandra |
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