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Open Poetry #16

A Journey...in You

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-23 04:52 PM

Captive in a
hazel stare,
her heart is
taken to journey

on this trek to
the very core of him
she feels the joys
of love, strokes
the pains of loss…

she is scratched by the scars
which callous his heart…
encounters the phantom
arresting his spirit

his need for love…his fear
of love…

now she understands…

Always with a loving heart

achildsheart
10-23-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-10-23 05:01 PM

A worthwhile journey...I hope he can find time to leave the baggage behind to discover the riches before him...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-10-23 05:06 PM

his need for love…his fear
of love…

now she understands…

Always with a loving heart
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This is so loving...so gentle. Enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

3 posted 2001-10-24 07:50 AM

thank you, I hope this touched you the way it has touched me.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-10-25 06:37 AM

Opening new horizons of one's gift of love. It's scary sometimes...but worth the patience and the destination of visiting the deepest part of someone's heart. I loved this!

Sincerely,
Regina

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-10-25 12:02 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Annie, this is so touching and captivating, your beautiful heart speaks of the pure gifts of love! (sigh) I love it! Your whispers always caress the heart, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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