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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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~*~ eddying fogs free memories that sing to stars dawn will come smiling ~*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
oh, smiling Sunshine fog cannot exist with you it evaporates Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Embers of Eden Shine from our Sunshine's heart Whispering dawns song (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet Karilea! Your beautiful words always touch my heart, and inspire me too to write senryu! (smiles) Beautiful, sweet sunshine, your poetry always swirls with lovely visions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
oh, yes, this is magical!  -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Misty shadows dance in sync with dawns recital good morning Sunshine  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Seaside skies opaque Unseen foghorn drones from shore Heralding till dawn |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
eddying I love that word, and the pleasure it brings as a part of this morning song! Willie B [This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, and with the dawn comes sunshine into my life. BRAVO!!! I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
And with a poem by Sunshine, comes a smile. |
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RocketRide Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 13USA |
'sing to the stars' for some reason, i really enjoyed that line very nice  peace, rocketride |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sis, with few words or many stanzas, you get the feel right to the heart..Very well done |
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