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walker
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0 posted 2001-10-23 07:20 PM



I didn't try to
concealed my identity
But somehow became
lost in the crowd
No gender
No home
At times lonely
At times in love
I didn't hide
but became hidden
By what you read
in me
Some like to judge
Others support
I'm not alone
there are others out there
who you don't know
but feel you know

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-23 07:26 PM


I think we all put parts of ourselves in our poetry yet at the same time doesn't anyone truly know us just from reading our words. This wonderful poem is filled with honest truth. Sometimes we are all lost in the crowd. Wonderful writing.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-10-23 07:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) We are never alone, for while there are many who don't feel like we do, they are some, and our loving Lord is always up above to guide us! (sigh) Beautiful expressive poem, sweet friend, your heart shines in your wonderful words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-10-24 12:02 PM


walker---We're all misunderstood at times...some of us willingly.  But dear poet, you are never lost in the crowd.
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4 posted 2001-10-24 12:41 PM


Oh Walker my dear...Your face always stands out in a crowd. I know what you mean : )
Then on the other hand, I meet people on the computer and we click so well, it's like I've known them for years

Larry C
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5 posted 2001-10-24 02:02 AM


walker,
Not much worse than being alone in a crowd. But times can't be better unless they've been worse. Ouch, that's probably too cynical. Well, you know what I mean, right?  

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