Open Poetry #16 |
Blinding Trust from a Scattered Dust ....... inspired by Nightshade |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I read a poem by Nightshade called "...time will..." and it kept playing on my mind ... and so this piece was written Blinding Trust from a Scattered Dust ~~~ External crust of blinding trust withdraws from span deployed Edges curled its smoke unfurled unleashed but not destroyed ~ Prediction gleams within our dreams withdrawn deploys our fears Sobered fooled with emotions ruled then stripped by the strength of tears ~ Wisdom draws from unending flaws utilized to the wound we're sealing Shrinking scars in effect requires adding worth to the course of healing ~~~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Darn, but I for one am grateful you were so inspired.... this is a wonderful, binding read... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Prediction gleams within our dreams withdrawn deploys our fears Sobered fooled with emotions ruled then stripped by the strength of tears ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is really great!! Love it Rex! So glad Chris inspired you with hers. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rex, This is really good. I am honoured that you were inspired by my small entry. Hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff, Rex. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Good write Rex. External crust of blinding trust I like that imagery. Well done. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Decaflame ... as is your your reply ... Thankyou Nancy ... you're such a sweetheart ... your kind words of support to fellow writers is our blessing for sure Chris ... no entry is small ... everything we write is priceless and to think, we share it all for friendship Thankyou Sandra Tracey ... enjoy the imagery you use as well |
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