Open Poetry #16 |
Sleepless night (repost from teen #4) |
stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
Sleepless Night I lay in my bed, deep in thought how do I feel? I'm so distraught. I turn on my side and stare at the wall I just don't know what to do about it all. I turn on my back and stare at the ceiling. what is this new sensation that I'm feeling? I lay on my stomach, my face in my hand. what do I do? I just don't understand. I sit up in bed - I just can't sleep tonight. There's something about me that's not right. I lay back down and close my eyes, wondering again in whom I can confide. I touch the wall, then look up at the ceiling Maybe all I need is some time to start healing. I smile slowly as I close my eyes, And the tear on my cheek slowly dries. For now I know I must not weep, As I slowly drift off to sleep. this is my first post in open, and I decided to post my favourite. so, it's prolly awful on your standards..but I had to get a fresh perspective on something I've written. thanks!! ~*~I'm in love with a man named ZU~*~ *huggles Krissy* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Stacy, I know these times ever so well myself, for sometimes when I feel anxious or sad about something I just stare at the ceiling and think about myself and others. Then, when I think about all my loved ones, then I fall asleep, blessed to have something deep down in my heart. (big hugggssssss) You are a very special person, sweet Stacy, and I'm so happy you're beginning to post here! (smiles) You have such wonderful talent, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem we all go through sleepless nights. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is a wonderful poem and seeing as I had a sleepless night last night it suits me well. BRAVO!!!!A great opening poem from you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
stace- Great to see you posting in Open! This is no where near awful! You've done a great job expressing your emotions in this one. I felt it along with you as I read. Nicely done. Hope to see more of you here. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Stace, I was feeling your thoughts and pain right along with you as I read. Two nights ago I had a sleepless night and went through exactly all you speak of so well here. Welcome to Open. This poem was far from bad. Dawn |
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