Open Poetry #16 |
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Spin Towers |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom ![]() |
Where were we on 11th September? The day; the hour we'll always remember What we had for breakfast the kiss on the mouth as we said goodbye and you headed south Later on, thought things through who am I, who were you? One thing I know, brave you were Love is you Gone now: still loving you washing in, cycles though that was us, you and me washing, rinsing but now it's through! The last spin of life Wish I'd said.... hope you knew and now you're dead.. No time to say I care, truly care holding you in my heart you're here there spinning everywhere...!!! The images remain..this was the first thing I wrote at 14:31 for months...not sure it makes any sense...maybe that we need to say what is in our hearts before it is too late...called it "spin towers" Big HUGS to those that have seen me go through the wash and seen me spin.. Lobe is: something you can never repeat, it just revs at such power....doesn't it? HUGS |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cindy! So glad to see you again! It's been way too long. Your poem is an excellent expression, and yes, it makes much sense. Great Big HUGS!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you Denise.:-) LOL, I'm thinking I'd have disappeared into an abyss.. Glad to know I didn't ....often read, just away with the fairies most of the time, they do make me smile..*g* Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Rainbow how's it hangin ya' poetess its good to see yuh and I love your spin on things here o yuh |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Cindy I'm glad to see you around! You've given some much needed food for thought. Love ya rainbow! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetRainbowGirl~ It is so good to see you~ I've missed you~ ![]() Thank you for writing and posting this~ Much love~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cindy, I'm one of the new kids on the block. My first post was on this subject. I like this. The sad part is it does make sense. This should never have happened! Thanks. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yes indeed, Sept. 11th made me sit down and think - about myself, others and the world - and c ry. A poem straight from your rainbow heart. Good to see you again. You've been missed! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured the emotions of the time well in this piece. Wonderful to read you again Cindy. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cindy - Do I need to get in my row boat and come see you? I've missed you. It may sound strange, but I was thinking of you just before I came into PiP this morning, and there you were! Actually, I think of you a lot. I hope you are well and happy. Here's a huge old Yankee hug from an admiring colonial. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Welcome back, Rainbow. It's been a very long time. You have been missed..... ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You just don't know how good it is to see your name... what a special treat for my morning to open up PIP and see this world's most beautiful rainbow! *S* I've missed you much, sweet lady! *S* I think the events of that day have us all still spinning... well done, RG! |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Cindy! Welcome home....it has been too, too long... and yes, as you go back to that day here in this forum, you will see many, many hearts that have shared so much as to the events of that day, and those that followed.... so glad to see your face again! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you for sharing this. September 11 is a day I'll never forget. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah lady, it does my heart good to see you here...would you believe last night I was awake, thinking about old times and when we first came here, and how you and suthern and me wanted so much to chat like before and PIP moderators frowned on our frivolity ...well...there is today, to tell you that you are still in my heart, and I really love the way you wrote this ![]() |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cindy..so good to see you after such a long time. Your poem is heart wrenching, as was that time ...well expressed. Hugs to you! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh it's going to be a beautiful day! A beautiful Rainbow has just appeared ![]() Nice to see you here again darlin, hope you're here to stay. You've been missed. ![]() A beautifully expressed poem Cindy, heartwrenching! Sept 11 is a day the world will never forget. Maree ![]() [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
RainbowGirl- Great to see you back here! You've been missed. ![]() Wonderful job of expressing these feelings. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Rainbowgirl, I can say that I'm sorry we've never met before, but it is nice to meet you now. ![]() Dawn |
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