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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-22 05:24 PM

Loving to Love You

What would you say to a meeting tonight,
after the indigo colours the skies?
Wandering free 'neath the quilted stars, bright
emptying darkness in loneliness, sighs.

Play me your memories, when looking in eyes.

What would you say to a kiss from these lips,
after you've held me in arms, tightly wound?
Centering me, in your heart rhythm skips,
where only silence of breathing is found.

Play the memories in eyes, yours, I've drowned.

What would you say to a night shared in all,
after the stargazing trembles in feel?
Forbidden affection 'til nighttimes fall,
loving to love you in dreams of the real.

Playing the memories eyes of blue steal.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-10-22 05:29 PM

Forbidden affection 'til nighttimes fall,
loving to love you in dreams of the real.

Playing the memories eyes of blue steal.

Great poem nakedthoughts, I especially loved the ending lines.

Maree

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-10-22 05:31 PM

thank you Maree...sometimes I just can't help but sit here wishing ... *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-10-22 06:39 PM

Wynter,
A lovely write, a lovely wish. Enjoyed.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-10-22 06:48 PM

Frankly, I'd say yes

Beautiful Maureen and beautiful work.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-10-22 06:53 PM

Someday, perhaps
a wish to come true.
By any chance Sy,
are your eyes
of steel blue?...hmmm just wondering

thanks
(sheepishly smiling)
Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-10-22 06:58 PM

If Sy's are not blue
and this Texan's of steel,
perhaps, maybe someday
wishes become real.

haaa this is fun,
I should try this more often.

Thanks You Guys
hugsssss
Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-10-22 07:38 PM

(sigh) Such a beautiful wish and longing I always wish for your sweet heart, dearest Wynter! (sigh) You know, I too have blue eyes! (winks) Wonderful poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-10-22 07:54 PM

Noah Dear, you are about hmmmmmm...30 years too young for me..but if I was in your age bracket, You certainly would be first on my list of men I would enjoy the pleasure of meeting...

love to you, sweet friend

*and yes, I am flirting despite the age difference.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2001-10-23 01:13 AM

I like to read your thoughts after you have penned their reflection ... most interesting!!
"I was taken by my own thoughts as I read
lost, and found, by the words you said
reminiscing
perhaps wishing
wondering the colour of your eyes ahead"

( mine are blue ) *s*

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2001-10-23 01:19 AM

Wynter,
(Noah, I should have gotten here sooner. 'Cause I got those 30 years covered.)
So liked the poem, ALOT!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-23-2001).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-10-23 01:09 PM

ctowen ...

I have

Eyes of the Night

I left in your pain,
eyes of the night telling all.
Myst surrounding me,
a season's warmth
undressing my thoughts,
silence a replacement
for the strength of you.

I rode my thoughts,
placing you beside me,
hand resting on my knee
calming my soul. The starkness
of the night overwhelming,
reigning me in, shades of blue,
as eyes look my way.

I walked away,
looking over my shoulder
closing the door behind,
remembering, knowing, feeling,
believing, in the pull of the moon.
Climbed the stairs, memory by memory,
shadows to follow.

I glimpsed you in my dreams,
holding each moment's touch
before me, eyes caressing eyes,
lips coveting lips, veiled by words
felt through fingertips, pressing my mind,
'til time disappeared and
the eyes of the night closed in.

And the color is Hazel...they change with my
moods...mostly a smoldering blue-gray I am told...
*s

Larry C
30 years  covered?...hmmmm...well some wouldn't
admit to that...thanks again
hey..and did you say yours were "steel blue" also?

you sure know how to flatter a  gal..

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-23-2001).]

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