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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-22 01:17 PM



just what is a friend
should be easy to answer
in truth it is not
one upon whom to depend
one who can depend on you
~*~
but much more than that
friends will choose to cry with you
and you cry with them
completely accepting you
even knowing all your faults
~*~
even more than that
friends will listen to your words
when they don't make sense
I could write a thousand words
and still not define a friend
~*~

Inspired by: Sven's question

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-22 01:36 PM



There is much wisdom here...tanka very much!

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with you
2 posted 2001-10-22 02:36 PM


I know what a friend is!!!  
IT'S YOU!!!  

Interloper
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3 posted 2001-10-22 02:40 PM


Lady ~
You are VERY welocme  

SEA ~
Noooooo, it's YOU!  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2001-10-22 02:50 PM


It is so hard to define a friend, but I have always been told that a friend is one who knows you and accepts you regardless of your faults.  You indeed are a friend to all.
Tanka Away!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-10-23 06:59 PM


bumperz

Admiring you at Passions.

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6 posted 2001-10-23 07:04 PM


Oh so loverly....     ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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7 posted 2001-10-23 08:44 PM




(smiles) Friendship is indeed a definition of so many answers, but I know one who is a wonderful friend...you! (big hugggssssss) Beautiful, I love how you write, it's always so wonderful! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-10-23 09:34 PM


friend....yes.....someone you should never be afraid of...

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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9 posted 2001-10-23 09:38 PM


Wonderfully done, Interloper!!  A friend is one you can depend on always, no matter what happens or where life takes you.  A true treasure and blessing.  Much enjoyed this!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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10 posted 2001-10-23 10:35 PM


great job oh Voice of the Southland. . . indeed a friend is this. . . and so much more. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2001-10-23 10:44 PM


A friend is one who'll never cease
as in true Love won't death release.

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12 posted 2001-10-24 12:15 PM


A friend is so many things that defy definition... but you've given a good one here. *S* I liked this very much. *S*
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