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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-21 02:18 PM

Cracking ever so slightly
the facade of "it's ok"
cracking, breaking, almost done
not much more that I can say.

Do not leave me broken now
truly I am made of glass
though I be your cup of wine
only so long can I last.

You must fill the glass a bit
sitting frozen by itself
if you wish your drink still there,
add a little wine yourself.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-10-21 02:29 PM

Very wise words, Sandra! Beautifully expressed!

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-10-21 02:30 PM

Sandra, ok, this really got to me....really!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-10-21 04:00 PM

Beautiful and so eloquently expressed.....

You are certainly much much more than just that.....much more sweet lady.

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

4 posted 2001-10-21 04:21 PM

Amazing, and beautiful. I loved it!

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

5 posted 2001-10-21 04:21 PM

Nice one, especially the last two lines.

Jon

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-10-21 06:21 PM

poured out into the vessel of the soul. . .

I like this Sandra. . . it's a look inside. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2001-10-21 06:34 PM

Oh, I liked this one catalinamoon!! Direct --to the point. Very good. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-10-21 07:12 PM

Telling it like it is, I like that. Nice work, my friend.

(((hugs))) Have missed you!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Nature Girl
Junior Member

since 2001-10-19

Posts 31

9 posted 2001-10-21 07:39 PM

Oh, I like... what a unique analogy...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-10-21 07:44 PM

Perfect Sandra...just perfect!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2001-10-21 08:00 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, you are so much more to us than that always! (smiles) You have a very loving golden heart that shines with beautiful love and light that never cracks! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet Sandra! (smiles) Wonderful poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2001-10-21 08:05 PM

I once learned how to repair broken glass, so if you ever need to have that done..give me a word or two or better still smooth the edges and place them in a kaleidoscope and share your beautiful design.

...hiya Moon..hope all is well

((hugssssss))
Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-10-21 10:37 PM

This is really, really good Sandra. Great metaphor there. This speaks volumes

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

14 posted 2001-10-24 10:42 AM

I will add the wine
slowly sipping each other
we are satisfied

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

15 posted 2001-10-24 10:45 AM

To sip at the wine of love is truly the nectar of the Gods. Magnificent.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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