Open Poetry #16 |
Fevered stars and harvest fires |
The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
The path to loving you is strewn with fevered stars and harvest fires that journey through my evening muse. I gaze at the only photograph of you I kept. Your eyes…eclipse my trembling persona A souvenir? Of temptation? Yes, I suppose you were, for I found you- or did you find me? aqua blue eyes and charcoal brown met one another. Dimensions unfolded ah, yes, the emotional butterflies spun around the inside of my belly. For once you came in search of those primitive waters and awakened tiny buds and so….. I think of you... Passion fell unrestrained, uninhibited. Awaken me once again? No, you are only a photograph. Oh, how I loved you! My erotic scent takes flight to reach you, find you, embrace you and drift from a whisper of “I love you.” But no, my love, you are now- only a photograph but I cried in climax and I become now, a blurred memory. I released the inner child and I remember the warmth, and for that I thank you! Though, I deny the almond milk of my lust, frame you in a shimmering pool, I remain a withered seed trapped in moist earth. And now? I am brought to my knees to wait for an unobtainable moon Oh! Lamenting, cruel light…. search me, assemble me, move me from the forbidden distance of your image. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- artwork: Daniel B. Holeman [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW! This is outstanding! I am keeping this one for sure..... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lady of Shallot - another amazingly beautiful piece. Enjoyed!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Lady of Shallot, A very romantic write and I enjoyed the read. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Susan, Chris and Seymour, thank you for reading! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am brought to my knees to wait for an unobtainable moon Oh! Lamenting, cruel light…. search me, assemble me, move me from the forbidden distance of your image. Oh my, this so well says it all, doesn't it? How many of us are feeling like this? I suspect lots. Amazing poem. Sandra |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Sandra, thank you for reading....I was just dipping into my "muse" imagination a bit! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I am absolutely in awe of the vision you have created with words. Fantastic. Your talent is amazing. I so love reading your poems. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW! Sending you an email regarding this poem, it is magnificant. OH! You don't have an email listed? I wanted to ask if I may print this out as is, and frame this one? Also, I would like to read it to my seniors next Tuesday at our reading group if I may? Again, this was absolutely fantastic, I loved it! Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Startime, thank you for your kindness. Sharon, I e-mailed you, you're more than welcome to print this and those seniors? Ha ha you think they are ready for this! whoo hoo well, go for it lady! thank you again! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I think of you... Passion fell unrestrained, uninhibited. Awaken me once again? No, you are only a photograph. Oh, how I loved you! Wow...this is really an incredible piece. I like your writing style alot. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh, this is such a sad but such a beautiful poem too! (sad sigh) Your sorrow reflects the beauty of sweet love in a photograph your hand holds close to your heart! (sigh) I pray that you find the strength to move on then find true sweet love like that of that memory. (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Duncan, thank you so much! Noah, relax dear one, it is just a muse! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a portrait of life. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
THIS is a materpiece and I applaud you!! ~NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh wow, this is a great, great write. So very well done. I love it If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Sven, thank you for the reply! Nancy Lee, what a nice thing to say, well heck you should see some of the pictures of myself I have, they are all blurred!!! LOL Thank you. Tracey, thank you dear. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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