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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Wine Today I sip my wine of cast From sweet and sour of my past Grown of the earth and sun above To taste the spirit of my love The essence of epitome Fermented by its alchemy. A cup that’s filled with full of now Poured and brood of pasts endow. The taste is full upon my lips This essence that my lips so sips And I am close to ecstasy This very simple chemistry A pinch of this, a trace of that A little loving and a pat The silence and the touch of hand Body’s language and understand. By fusing the dichotomy We overcome anatomy And bridge the bridge where ever lies Within the bend of human ties Put your past in its proper place And you will feel eternal grace. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
as I dreamt, I tasted ecstasy last night... lovely thoughts arising, Sir Enjoying Thy words, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
from vast vat the wine is blend horizon's past the vine is wend cast eyes on pasts that have been servier pours the now of when as always, you delight my Sunday morn... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A very good spirit!!! May we toast the last stanza, forever in the bouquet, tasting the embodiment of the future! Cheers!! From a wino...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lade Ollyne, Thank you so much for the read and like. Sunshine, Thank you sweet, *L*. Rwood, Cute response, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Ahhhhh, the sacraments of wine you have captured in your rhyme Served in chaliced cup of day steeped in sweetest thoughts bouquet~ And a lovely Sunday morning to you, friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Sweet lady, have a happy, love and kisses Sy |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, how do you do it? Your muse is magic!!What do I have to do to borrow this randy dragon of yours?!!  I love this, bravo! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Just forget about the past dragon and jump on the dragon of the future. *L* Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Today I sip my wine of cast From sweet and sour of my past Grown of the earth and sun above To taste the spirit of my love. The essence of epitome Fermented by its alchemy. A cup that’s filled with full of now Poured and brood of pasts endow. =============================== And I am close to ecstasy This very simple chemistry ================================ The silence and the touch of hand Body’s language and understand. By fusing the dichotomy We overcome anatomy And bridge the bridge where ever lies Within the bend of human ties. Put your past in its proper place And you will feel eternal grace. ===================================== We sip from thy verse ... sweet wisdom's wine grapes of knowledge ... preserved in thy mind of time Entwined in rhyme ... golden gifted poetic vine To read thy lines ... is a taste of something fine ~*~ Stinky..this poem is COOLER than even YOU know... and thats WAAAY COOL and Sunshine...I love thy reply rhyme *winkiewinkie* (keep randy out of the wine) *L*  me  [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I don't know, Randy jumped into the vat. And I'm having a heck of a time from keeping him from burning the house down. Winkiewinkie Love you Stinky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Vandana. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Sy! Soooo beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the lovely. *L* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sy, your poems make me sigh, you present thoughts with such wisdom and grace. "By fusing the dichotomy We overcome anatomy And bridge the bridge where ever lies Within the bend of human ties" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
And you are my midnitesun, thank you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that Sir was filled with one big jug of wisdom! To hang onto anything that makes one feel badly is futile. Once "it" is gone, like your fine wine, it's gone, and time to head to the future! These two lines are probably the greatest and wisest lines I have read in a long time.... "Put your past in its proper place And you will feel eternal grace." Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Eloquent and lovely The phrases you string And wisdom, a bonus you graciously bring THank you Liz |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this..a truly enjoyable, and delicious poem, in every way. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A wonderfully romantic poem that makes the lonely heart dream dreams that are filled with such tender love as this. Tasting of the sweet wine of love fills one with a magical glow. BRAVO!!! I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, It takes wisdom to see wisdom. Elizabeth, Thank you sweet lady. Catalinamoon, Thank you for the delicious. Startime, And thank you for the bravo. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one I did!! Think I shall choose a bottle to have with dinner....Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, A wonderful idea, thank you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
By fusing the dichotomy We overcome anatomy And bridge the bridge where ever lies Within the bend of human ties ST---Very cool write. I love the way you play with language. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Seymour, I have friends who are always encouraging me to put my past in its place. Maybe someday I will be able to do that and get on with my life. Dawn |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dawn, You have good friends, thanks for the read and comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, Seymour... the closing couplet is wise advice I wish I could find a way to follow. *S* Great work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you, It's not original but good advice. *L* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- Ya just gotta love this write! Wonderfully written, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Thank you for the wonderful comment. *L* |
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