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The Power Of A Kiss.....Tanka and Senryus
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The Power Of A Kiss.....Tanka and Senryus |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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 True Love's Kiss Tanka Our hearts will breathe in the flavours of destiny within one soul kiss inhaling deep ecstasy to suckle true love's essence  Beautiful Kiss Senryu Sensual beauty love's splendor in a soft kiss two souls left breathless Blissful Kiss Senryu Sweet taste of passion reveling in kiss of bliss entwined hearts do sing Perfect Kiss Senryu Synchronicity one moment of perfection when our heartbeats kiss By Melissa P. Monette |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunning and absolutely magnificent. I love these and the way you have presented them. Isn't it amazing the power that is contained in a single kiss. *sigh* wonderful reading. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Melissa: Incredibly romantic! These are beautifuly written.... you are a truly gifted poet. Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
not only the power of a kiss. . . but, the power of a poem. . . the power of words of love from The Queen of Romance. . . wonderful. . . just wonderful. . . you're making me sigh over here Melissa. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, Your magic continues, ROMANCE LIVES! You write so well the things of the heart. Peace, Dennis :^) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh my gosh, these tankas and senryus are soooooooo gorgeous! (smiles) You speak of the beauty and magic of all different kinds of kisses and the beauty behind them! (smiles) I've always wondered what my first kiss will be like, I want it to be all these beautiful ones you describe together! (big hugggssssss) Here's a special kiss on your cheek from me! (muah) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
melissa, I'm truly amazed, your beautiful words touched me. ~ cottage |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
These are beautiful poems. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gosh, you're ALL making me  big time! Thank you so much, I'm glad that you enjoyed this~Sven and Noah - Awwwww, you're so sweet! And thank you to Tara (rosepetals25) for finding that graphic for me! "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Excellent! I especially liked ...when our heartbeats kiss... Thanks Melton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, I knew you could come up with something wonderful and beatufil! Like I said I thought of you right away. Your poetry is amazing.. I'm jealous of your haiku/senyru/tanka talents  They are perfect   Tara |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Melissa, Lovely !! Enjoyed.  ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I feel as though I have been kissed by your words.....and you're a GOOD kisser!  |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, girl, i need some of that inspiration!!!! such lovely thoughts and music |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Awww... Melissa, I've enjoyed reading all of these and the format was very pleasing to the eye! Excellent! *smiles* ~Tier |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow. Melissa. To come back in here after being absent awhile and find this the first thing to read...stunning, enchanting...wonderful, my friend. jwesley |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh you have certainly figured out the key to romance ... for it all starts with ... THE Kiss. If the kiss melts you, he's the one. Lovely work here, I truly enjoyed these. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Not only superb, but beautiful also Melissa. Wonderful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love theses kisses powerful indeed, thanks for sharing. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Whew, The man that gets these kisses is truely in love I'm sure! I want a man to give me kisses like this! Love this melissa! Cindi |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- Beautifully romantic, my friend. Enjoyed. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Awwwww..........so beautiful and sweet. Wonderful Melissa.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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