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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-10-20 08:26 PM


A Place Called Truth

Come around, head for the sun
if you blink you will be lost
remember always turn right
keep moving at any cost

Still buried in the heartland
down the road from reality
lies a town, a place called Truth
just west of any city

To visit seek honesty
roaming through a mindless state
you will find when least expect
once again, don't hesitate



© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-10-20 08:42 PM


A very thought provoking and interesting read.  thanx.
Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-20 08:53 PM


A very interesting way of putting it. This is a place we would all love to find. I love this poem and its wonderful message.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-20 08:59 PM


Ya know, there's also a town called Truth or Consequences. This could be the same place.
I enjoyed the thoughts in this.

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4 posted 2001-10-20 09:54 PM


Hi, I like this a lot, very well done.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-10-20 10:13 PM



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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