Open Poetry #16 |
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What Is True Love? |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Trust me guys, I have to work at this too.... What is true love? True love is: Waking, seeing you there beside me, smiling as I watch. Looking at you as you do things, watching every move. Seeing your happiness, knowing you gave it to her. Seeing her sadness, holding and comforting her. Seeing her faults as being human, not being wrong. Forgiving harsh words, knowing they are not true. Accepting criticism as growing, not as condemnation. Listening to her, even when your favorite program is on. Giving her little things though nothing special has occurred. Letting her be right more often that she does you. Always showing her respect, being your equal. Calling her at times when it was not necessary. Holding her close, whispering little things in her ear. Kissing her softly on the back of her neck. Being there always, even when away....Calling, caring. Acting like young lovers every chance you have. Never expecting it to be perfect, just wonderful. Making sure everyone knows she is your life, not just your wife. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yep, sounds like true love to me. Sounds like you've got it there. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I would say that pretty much sums it up, except for...easier to describe than attain. Great write! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, you have it right. I guess it just takes work and sometimes we forget the true love doesn't always just happen. Both lovers need to do their part and it sure looks like you are doing yours. BRAVO!!!! A great read, Magnus. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tracey, Duncan, Startime.... Yes, lots of hard work....Don't always get it right...Sometimes have to do this and look back, see where I am falling short. takes two to make it work well. and a lot of love. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Acting like young lovers every chance you have. Never expecting it to be perfect, just wonderful. Making sure everyone knows she is your life, not just your wife." this is it for me, *sigh*.... ![]() yes please ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan....I am far from perfect....but I try to remember these little things that make BIG differences....Happy that you liked this. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Yes it is, true love is everything you've said and so much more! To accept and to promise is what makes true love, and your golden heart floods with it! (smiles) beautiful, dearest friend, I love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Noah...happy you enjoyed this. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Magnus, you seem to have the idea here ![]() Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
*sigh* beautiful poem about true love. I had that once and hope to find it again someday. Dawn |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a good thing going..Lucky you. Very nicely done. Sandra |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
loving someone in sickness and health.... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Dee....that is about all it is...and I have to work on it every day....Some days I do well and make points, some I give points back. Thanx. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dawn, I too hope you experience it again. A wonderful feeling when you have it, not so when you do not. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra...thank you...true love is not easy to always give some one...but the smiles are so wonderful. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seems that sickness and health always contrast. We give them all we can when they are sick and too often not enough when we all are well. thank you Lady of S. |
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