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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-10-20 04:55 PM




I’m not changing my religion
so much as I am converting to you
In my dreams is where I worship
Each night through

It’s not that I pray in different languages
Or speak in strange tongues, unable to distinguish
Instead I use words easily understood
To prevent undue anguish

The heart challenges faith
Tests thoughts and interrupts meditation
Loosing reason to darkness and free will
Complete complication

In my soul the light shines
To guide my direction true
And no matter the course
I still come to you….


~SEA~


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2001-10-20 05:40 PM


Sea, what a lovely way of putting it. Someone is a very lucky man to be worshipped like this.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-10-20 05:42 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2001-10-20 05:55 PM


Just beautiful Susan.....lovely work.  ~hugs, Nancy~
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4 posted 2001-10-20 05:57 PM


Susan,  wonderful words of faith in this.
Very nice lady...

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just out of reach
5 posted 2001-10-20 05:58 PM


SEA, This is really well done, and a perfect pic too!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2001-10-20 06:49 PM




(smiles) And you are the sweet angel that he will always worship, just as you are an angelt o us all, sweet Susan! (big hugggssssss) Beautiful lovely poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-10-20 07:27 PM


BRAVO!!!How do you keep doing this. You always say things so perfectly and leaving me thinking the same thing time after time. MAGNIFICENT. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

DawnG
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8 posted 2001-10-20 09:52 PM


Really beautiful Sea.  

                         Dawn

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