Open Poetry #16 |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
margaret My love was one Who made the birds sing! And in the depth of winter Could turn my thoughts to spring She was the ending of my day She shared first morning light And in between these lay The warm and loving night Sadly I turn from where she lays Leaving love, life , and all delight Weary and listless are my days Sad, cold, and lonely are my nights arthur |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sad sigh) Oh Michael, this is so so heartbreaking yet so beautiful too! (sad sigh) My heart cries out to your lost love and I pray that soon you will again be embraced by such beautiful love like this. (big hugggsssssss) Sad but beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have written many soft and loving words....I too lost a Margaret...a very dear and close friend...take care...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
My heart goes out to you for the loss you have had to endure. I pray that the pain lessens with time and that again you may greet the sun with pleasure. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael, lovely yet sad...melancholy write. Very well said as usual! Hugs across the pond, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Arthur, A well thought out and well written poem. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
arthur - This was a lovely, enjoyable read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
You make me proud of the English language, and I mean that! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a beautiful, heart wrenching poem. You have a wonderful soft touch in your words. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely tribute to her Michael. And I'm sure she is up above with a proud tear in her eye, as she reads what you have written for her. Take care. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Arthur, My heart goes out to you. *hugs*. Dawn |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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