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Come out with me and play (inspired by Duncan)
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Come out with me and play (inspired by Duncan) |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 Come out with me and play awake the autumn day! Oh! I will be once more the woman you adore! A spirit covered pure in touch of your allure. We'll glide for just a time within our flow of rhyme. My heart and soul moves to and fro to fill with trust from long ago; as I hold onto to make believe and sway to wind that fairies breathe! Oh play with me throughout the day and push my doubts and tears away. Yes, I will be a child again until the woman calls you in. For then your arms return the feel of afterglow from love so real. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- Anna [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo gorgeous! The sweetness of love fills your words with the happy spirit of youth and innocence! (smiles) Your poetry is always so beautiful to read, sweet lady! (big hugggssssss) You hae such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
CLAPPING AND CHEERING!!! This is the perfect response. Very well done. I love it and I am sure Duncan will too.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Noah, thank you!!!!! Startime, he made me think of the freedom I felt when I was a child and how I love to swing!!!! Thank you for reading and enjoying!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, this is such a nice reply. See how sweet hearts make you fly? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, I will be a child again until the woman calls you in. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lady, this is a great way to be all the time! Good words to live by I say. Lovely, Nancy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful gem.....love it  Charisma |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, how my few lines could have inspired such a beautiful dream of a day, I don't know. But thank you for finding them inspiring. Once again, your choice of artwork is perfection. And your words do capture those carefree days of early fall. I hope it's as beautiful in your world today as it is here. Now...go outside and swing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don't know why but this poem made me stop thinking of that Offspring song Come Out And Play...James |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a really refreshing poem to read in this particular time in our world. Ah to always have the innocence of a child. Great work. Dawn |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Mitnitesun: Yes, that’s how I felt! thank you Nancy, it is a wonderful memory, thank you for reading. Charisma, appreciate that, thank you! Duncan, and thank you so much for lighting the memory. It just made me feel good, you know! The way I used to feel, happy and free. James Michael, funny how a poem can remind us of songs. Thank you for replying. Dawn, yes, right now, it’s important to find joy and in that, we get through. Thank you for reading. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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